that is beautiful and wonderful, Jel. If I were an editor of a poetry magazine I would have no hesitation in publishing this. It was so good, I read it twice.Course you can write; doesn't mean you have to but you can
I reckon you should try your hand at writing other pieces like this. It captures your personality and has an easy rhythm. In fact, I'm about to read it again --- a third time :)
thanks John,there are a few more.
That was great Jel - Dave
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